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General Chatter => Art => Multimedia => Full_Metals shit => Topic started by: Full_Metal on August 26, 2009, 11:42:18 AM

Title: Poem: Alone
Post by: Full_Metal on August 26, 2009, 11:42:18 AM

Feeling alone
no one to see everyday
no one there to love
what can you do

seeing a lot of happy couples
makes you wish you were with someone
that special bond between each other

a feeling everyone has felt
more then once in life
what to do now
you ask yourself

you keep a smile on your face
hiding what is inside
tearing you apart
that empty space

some days is harder then others
you get very depressed
just wishing you had someone to hold
wanting someone there to talk to

the day will come when you are ready
you will be happy again
together at last
with the person you love

Title: Re: Alone
Post by: RaO on August 26, 2009, 08:09:08 PM

this one of the best,it looks me

Title: Re: Alone
Post by: Full_Metal on August 27, 2009, 02:00:09 PM

thanks rao

Title: Re: Alone
Post by: Jumpman23 on August 27, 2009, 04:33:45 PM

Wow you seem pretty into literature Full Metal, I use to love the English language a lot, wrote poems and shit aswell, but sorta gave it up. Nice poem, interesting read.

Title: Re: Alone
Post by: [SKC]SyS on September 01, 2009, 07:23:59 AM

well it doesnt sound like you are having a nice life time.
Life is like that good moments bad moments +/- moments etc it sounds quite sadly to be honest , just find it cool that you post this things cause normaly people let it die on some old diary.
And who knows maybe u find ur other half on mta foruns ehehehe u nerver know.

Title: Re: Alone
Post by: Full_Metal on September 01, 2009, 07:27:19 AM

atm i may have an other half, not to sure as to that yet, she is still making up her mind

Title: Re: Alone
Post by: RaO on September 01, 2009, 01:43:10 PM

Quote from: [SKC]SyS on September 01, 2009, 07:23:59 AM

well it doesnt sound like you are having a nice life time.
Life is like that good moments bad moments +/- moments etc it sounds quite sadly to be honest , just find it cool that you post this things cause normaly people let it die on some old diary.
And who knows maybe u find ur other half on mta foruns ehehehe u nerver know.

Agreed,i am not having a good life.I want be 18 and life will start be good to me

Title: Re: Alone
Post by: Full_Metal on September 01, 2009, 08:22:27 PM

its not any better, it is at the time, then everything just ends up being the same